FILM STUDIES & CINEMATOGRAPHY // Project 2
Week 6 - Week 14 (02/04/2022 - 28/06/2022)
Fann Man Ling - 0344623 (BDCM)
Film Studies & Cinematography // Mr. Martin
Project 2
INSTRUCTION
Module Information Booklet
PROJECT 2: Pitch Bible
WEEK 6 - 9 // 02.04.2022 - 24.05.2022
CHARACTER DESIGN
Attempt 1We were given the task of developing our character designs based on the plot set after we had the story ready. Here is my character design in its initial stages.
Fig 1.1: Character design_Attempt 1
Feedback:
Mr. Martin pointed out that the character should fit well in the story and the clothing is not a good choice. Thus, a localized character would be recommended.
Attempt 2
I decided to make it shorter to give it the appearance of a kid after receiving the feedback.
Fig 1.2: Character design_Attempt 2
Attempt 3
However, as I was building the animatic, I discovered that the character designs were not sufficiently localized to fit the scene of my story. Therefore, change is done once more.
Fig 1.3: Character design_Attempt 3
Final Attempt
I updated the character's outfit as I felt the character's identity was confusing and I wanted to give it a more feminine appeal. In order to achieve the ideal appearance and cater to the animation scenes, I also tried out several colours.
Fig 1.4: Character design_Colour Attempt
Fig 1.5: Character design_Final Attempt
Fig 1.6： Character Turnaround.gif
WEEK 7 - 9 // 10.05.2022
SCRIPT
After all the ideation was planned, we need to start working on the script. We were instructed to download the Scenario scriptwriting app to write the story script. In order to help us become more familiar with script writing, Mr. Martin gave us an exercise and guide us to do it in class.
* Script Writing Exercise (In-class exercise) (link)
Attempt 1
Below is the first version of my story script for the 20 seconds animation short.
Fig 2.1: Script_Attempt 1
Feedback received from Mr. Martin:
- "one of her friends" in no 6. is advised to use Aunty A instead.
- should not put "to be continued" if there's no continuous story.
- error in the dialogue of waiter ("Kopi C!" "Kopi Gao").
Final Attempt
With the feedback given, I made amendments to it.
Fig 2.2: Script_Final Attempt
WEEK 15 // 10.07.2022
PITCH BIBLE
After gathering all the required information, we shall produce a pitch bible.
Fig 3.1: Pitch Bible
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