DESIGN RESEARCH METHODOLOGY // Research

Week 5 - Week 8 (26/04/2021 - 17/05/2021)
Fann Man Ling - 0344623 (BDCM)
Design Research Methodology // Dr. Hayati & Dr. Jinchi
Research

LECTURES

WEEK 5 // 26.04.2021

CRITICAL REVIEW

Lecture 5 (a)

Writing a Critical Review

Lecture 5 (b)

Lecture 5 (c)


WEEK 6 // 03.05.2021

QUANTITATIVE & QUALITATIVE RESEARCH

Lecture 6 (a)

Research Strategy

Lecture 6 (b)

After reviewing all the lecture materials given for Week 5 & 6, I organized the information in Microsoft OneNote.

Notes_Week 5 & 6 (29/04/2021)




INSTRUCTION

Module Information Booklet

Assessment Rubric


ASSIGNMENT 2: Research

WEEK 5 // 26.04.2021

This week, supposedly we were tasked to do critical reviews on 2 journal articles that were used in our proposal. However, I have mistaken it and did 5 critical review papers.

Anyways, at first, I felt confused and have no clue to do it. Hence, I followed the supplementary notes and templates provided by lecturers (Lecture 5b & 5c) in the hope of getting a general picture to do it.

Then, I tried to organize the information and structure them into several sections (Introduction, Structure, Methodology, Sources, Conclusion) so that I know what to write in different paragraphs.

Fig 1: Notes_Content of Critical Review (30/04/2021)


Attempt #1 (first draft):


Fig 2: Critical Review_First Draft .pdf (02/05/2021)

WEEK 6 // 03.05.2021

Today, Dr. Hayati reviewed our critical review paper and gave us feedback. However, Dr. Hayati said she would provide me feedback for the 2 completed critical review papers next week instead because she needs to read the article first before she makes a judgment on it to make sure the feedback given is fair and accurate. Additionally, she gave compliments on my effort as I have done 5 critical reviews in advance. Subsequently, Dr. Hayati did review roughly on my first critical review paper and gave some feedback on it.

WEEK 7 // 10.05.2021

Today is the feedback session for critical review. 

The feedback I got from Dr, Hayati is some sentences need to be rephrased and split into two sentences as it is too much. Furthermore, although I have analyzed the methodology and reasonings of the research thoroughly, the content is missing because I didn't justify and describe it in my paper. Also, I was advised to include my personal findings and takeaways in my paper as well based on the research criticized.

After taking the feedback given into consideration, I redid my critical reviews and compiled all of them into one pdf. Below is the version that I have submitted.

PDF Compilation of Critical Review:

Fig 3: Compilation_Critical Review .pdf (16/05/2021)

WEEK 14 // 04.07.2021

However, I realized there are mistakes I made in explaining the methodology used by the particular authors in their research. For instance, I misunderstood a questionnaire as simply a qualitative approach. In fact, it is a quantitative approach if the author used closed-ended questions, and data are expressed in numbers and graphs. Thus, it led to the wrong interpretation in my Critical Review 4 & 5.

Henceforth, I amended both Critical Reviews 4 & 5, and compile them with Critical Reviews 1, 2, 3 into one PDF file. 

Since I have submitted the previous version on Week 7 (16/05/2021), I can only show the revised version in my report compilation.

PDF Final Version of CR Compilation: 

Fig 4: Revised & Final Compilation_Critical Review .pdf (04/07/2021)


FEEDBACK

WEEK 6 // 03.05.2021

Specific feedback:
- foreign terms like “Kawaii” should be italic or put inverted commas.

- use ‘In’ instead of ‘For’.

- don't use "with", "for", "by and large" at the beginning of sentences.

- journal articles should be included Abstract, Keywords, and doi.

WEEK 7 // 10.05.2021

Specific feedback:
- well done in criticizing thoroughly the methodology and reasoning of the particular research article.

- however, the content is missing.

- should justify and describe the content and information of the particular journal.

- personal findings and takeaways should be added to the paper.

- “8” should be written in the word “eight” instead, unless it is a number for the year, unit, etc.


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